Please read this story and check the mistake! It's quite long!! Once upon a time, in that village had a nice girl who sang so beautifully, everyone really liked her voice, they called her by the name: Lisa. She lived happily with my family, until one day, (2024)

Table of Contents
‎Please read this story and check for mistakes! It's quite long!!Once upon a time, in village lived a nice girl who sang so beautifully, everyone was charmed by her voice, they called her Lisa. She lived happily with her family, until one day, her family didn’t live with her anymore, she left home and moved to another house to live. The atmosphere of the new house was very very bad, it was somber which made her feel somber as well. For two years Lisa didn’t smile once, she just work and work day by day. Why does your story not have an ending? Lines 2--in a village, there lived a nice girl...Lines 3--beautifully. Everyone loved her voice and she was called by the name- Lisa. She lived happily with her family, until one day her family left and because of that she had moved into another house where the atmosphere was bad which left her feeling sad. For those two years Lisa hadn't smiled once because she would work all day everyday. 2nd Paragraph- ......When Lisa was "looking" for @thachminh It feels similar to Cinderella. References

Question

Updated on

thachminh

15 Feb 2018

  • Vietnamese

  • English (US)

Question about English (US)

Answers

Please read this story and check the mistake! It's quite long!! Once upon a time, in that village had a nice girl who sang so beautifully, everyone really liked her voice, they called her by the name: Lisa. She lived happily with my family, until one day, her family didn’t live with her anymore, she left home and moved to another house to live. The atmosphere of the new house was very very bad, it was somber and her feeling as well. For two years, Lisa didn’t smile once, she just work and work day by day. One day, when Lisa was finding up a new job, she read a recruitment of new servants and wanted to be recruited ‘cause if she do it, she will have many money to cover her life. The next two days, she was recruited by a butler in that house, she felt amazing, a little happy and wonder if why they chose her. One week later, she came that house to work, the butler gave her clothes for servant and said:“Change your clothes, my lovely girl!”. After Lisa wore done, the butler said:“ Let’s go to the master’s room!”. Lisa was in font of the room, knocked at the door and walked into, the butler said to her:“ This is our master, his name is Rindo”, then turned round see the boy who was sitting on the chair:“ That is the maid who I was recruited to you, master!”, she said. He was just smirked and said regretfully: “ OK, my madam, you can come back your position, please get out of here right now” (2)

When you "disagree" with an answer

The owner of it will not be notified.Only the user who asked this question will see who disagreed with this answer.

OK

Read more comments

rnsgrhm

15 Feb 2018

  • English (US)

‎Please read this story and check for mistakes! It's quite long!!Once upon a time, in village lived a nice girl who sang so beautifully, everyone was charmed by her voice, they called her Lisa. She lived happily with her family, until one day, her family didn’t live with her anymore, she left home and moved to another house to live. The atmosphere of the new house was very very bad, it was somber which made her feel somber as well. For two years Lisa didn’t smile once, she just work and work day by day. One day, when Lisa was searching for a new job, she read a recruitment flyer requesting new servants and wanted to be recruited ‘cause if she did it, she will have more money to cover her cost of living. In two days, she was recruited by the butler in that house, she felt amazing, a little happy and wondered why they chose her. One week later, she came that house to work, the butler gave her clothes for a servant and said “Change your clothes, my lovely girl!”. After Lisa wore done, the butler said "Let’s go to the master’s room!”. Lisa was in font of the room, knocked at the door and walked inside. The butler said to her “This is our master, his name is Rindo”, then turned round see the boy who was sitting on the chair. “That is the maid who I recruited for you, master!”, she said. He just smirked and said regretfully “OK, my madam, you can go back your position, please get out of here right now”

‎Please read this story and check for mistakes! It's quite long!!
Once upon a time, in village lived a nice girl who sang so beautifully, everyone was charmed by her voice, they called her Lisa. She lived happily with her family, until one day, her family didn’t live with her anymore, she left home and moved to another house to live. The atmosphere of the new house was very very bad, it was somber which made her feel somber as well. For two years Lisa didn’t smile once, she just work and work day by day.

One day, when Lisa was searching for a new job, she read a recruitment flyer requesting new servants and wanted to be recruited ‘cause if she did it, she will have more money to cover her cost of living. In two days, she was recruited by the butler in that house, she felt amazing, a little happy and wondered why they chose her.

One week later, she came that house to work, the butler gave her clothes for a servant and said “Change your clothes, my lovely girl!”. After Lisa wore done, the butler said "Let’s go to the master’s room!”. Lisa was in font of the room, knocked at the door and walked inside. The butler said to her “This is our master, his name is Rindo”, then turned round see the boy who was sitting on the chair. “That is the maid who I recruited for you, master!”, she said. He just smirked and said regretfully “OK, my madam, you can go back your position, please get out of here right now”

rnsgrhm

15 Feb 2018

  • English (US)

Why does your story not have an ending?

0likes

Highly-rated answerer

Please read this story and check the mistake! It's quite long!! Once upon a time, in that village had a nice girl who sang so beautifully, everyone really liked her voice, they called her by the name: Lisa. She lived happily with my family, until one day, her family didn’t live with her anymore, she left home and moved to another house to live. The atmosphere of the new house was very very bad, it was somber and her feeling as well. For two years, Lisa didn’t smile once, she just work and work day by day. One day, when Lisa was finding up a new job, she read a recruitment of new servants and wanted to be recruited ‘cause if she do it, she will have many money to cover her life. The next two days, she was recruited by a butler in that house, she felt amazing, a little happy and wonder if why they chose her. One week later, she came that house to work, the butler gave her clothes for servant and said:“Change your clothes, my lovely girl!”. After Lisa wore done, the butler said:“ Let’s go to the master’s room!”. Lisa was in font of the room, knocked at the door and walked into, the butler said to her:“ This is our master, his name is Rindo”, then turned round see the boy who was sitting on the chair:“ That is the maid who I was recruited to you, master!”, she said. He was just smirked and said regretfully: “ OK, my madam, you can come back your position, please get out of here right now” (11)

Was this answer helpful?

Junice

15 Feb 2018

  • English (US)Near fluent

Lines 2--in a village, there lived a nice girl...
Lines 3--beautifully. Everyone loved her voice and she was called by the name-
Lisa. She lived happily with her family, until one day her family left and because of that she had moved into another house where the atmosphere was bad which left her feeling sad. For those two years Lisa hadn't smiled once because she would work all day everyday.
2nd Paragraph- ......When Lisa was "looking" for

Please read this story and check the mistake! It's quite long!! Once upon a time, in that village had a nice girl who sang so beautifully, everyone really liked her voice, they called her by the name: Lisa. She lived happily with my family, until one day, her family didn’t live with her anymore, she left home and moved to another house to live. The atmosphere of the new house was very very bad, it was somber and her feeling as well. For two years, Lisa didn’t smile once, she just work and work day by day. One day, when Lisa was finding up a new job, she read a recruitment of new servants and wanted to be recruited ‘cause if she do it, she will have many money to cover her life. The next two days, she was recruited by a butler in that house, she felt amazing, a little happy and wonder if why they chose her. One week later, she came that house to work, the butler gave her clothes for servant and said:“Change your clothes, my lovely girl!”. After Lisa wore done, the butler said:“ Let’s go to the master’s room!”. Lisa was in font of the room, knocked at the door and walked into, the butler said to her:“ This is our master, his name is Rindo”, then turned round see the boy who was sitting on the chair:“ That is the maid who I was recruited to you, master!”, she said. He was just smirked and said regretfully: “ OK, my madam, you can come back your position, please get out of here right now” (18)

Was this answer helpful?

thachminh

15 Feb 2018

  • Vietnamese

@rnsgrhm thank you so much

0likes

thachminh

15 Feb 2018

  • Vietnamese

@rnsgrhm because I had no time to finish,sorry. However what do you think about my story?

0likes

rnsgrhm

15 Feb 2018

  • English (US)

@thachminh It feels similar to Cinderella.

Highly-rated answerer

Please read this story and check the mistake! It's quite long!! Once upon a time, in that village had a nice girl who sang so beautifully, everyone really liked her voice, they called her by the name: Lisa. She lived happily with my family, until one day, her family didn’t live with her anymore, she left home and moved to another house to live. The atmosphere of the new house was very very bad, it was somber and her feeling as well. For two years, Lisa didn’t smile once, she just work and work day by day. One day, when Lisa was finding up a new job, she read a recruitment of new servants and wanted to be recruited ‘cause if she do it, she will have many money to cover her life. The next two days, she was recruited by a butler in that house, she felt amazing, a little happy and wonder if why they chose her. One week later, she came that house to work, the butler gave her clothes for servant and said:“Change your clothes, my lovely girl!”. After Lisa wore done, the butler said:“ Let’s go to the master’s room!”. Lisa was in font of the room, knocked at the door and walked into, the butler said to her:“ This is our master, his name is Rindo”, then turned round see the boy who was sitting on the chair:“ That is the maid who I was recruited to you, master!”, she said. He was just smirked and said regretfully: “ OK, my madam, you can come back your position, please get out of here right now” (27)

Was this answer helpful?

[News] Hey you! The one learning a language!Do you know how to improve your language skills❓ All you have to do is have your writing corrected by a native speaker!With HiNative, you can have your writing corrected by native speakers for free ✍️✨.Sign up

Please read this story and check the mistake! It's quite long!! Once upon a time, in that village had a nice girl who sang so beautifully, everyone really liked her voice, they called her by the name: Lisa. She lived happily with my family, until one day, her family didn’t live with her anymore, she left home and moved to another house to live. The atmosphere of the new house was very very bad, it was somber and her feeling as well. For two years, Lisa didn’t smile once, she just work and work day by day. One day, when Lisa was finding up a new job, she read a recruitment of new servants and wanted to be recruited ‘cause if she do it, she will have many money to cover her life. The next two days, she was recruited by a butler in that house, she felt amazing, a little happy and wonder if why they chose her. One week later, she came that house to work, the butler gave her clothes for servant and said:“Change your clothes, my lovely girl!”. After Lisa wore done, the butler said:“ Let’s go to the master’s room!”. Lisa was in font of the room, knocked at the door and walked into, the butler said to her:“ This is our master, his name is Rindo”, then turned round see the boy who was sitting on the chair:“ That is the maid who I was recruited to you, master!”, she said. He was just smirked and said regretfully: “ OK, my madam, you can come back your position, please get out of here right now” (34)

Related questions

  • I wrote a note and could you check it please.It is retelling of Evelyn Waugh`s story "Mr Loveday`...
  • My Father Told me this story when i was a child. Inmediatly, I loved it, a few years later this s...
  • Please check grammar errors.It all started when I found a book on the bus. I picked the book ...
  • This is a question about the passage below.[Q] Which of the following can be best inferred fr...
  • Could anyone please help me to make the story sound more natural? “About 20 years ago in Californ...

Similar questions

  • Which story do you think is the most beautiful or interesting one in the Norse mythology?
  • "This story isn't the kind of story that would arouse a woman."Why should I use "would"? Please...
  • He told his story Does this sound natural?

Recommended Questions

  • Show more
  • Do you know the title of this tune?
  • 「 車で動物園に行く」と言いたいのですが、自分は運転せずに乗せてもらいます。I drive to the zoo.はダメですよね？普段ネイティブの方は、なんと表現しますか？
  • Among English native speakers, do you use the phrase "I find it hard to do" often? for example, i...
  • "Be kind to yourself by practice forgiveness"Does this sound natural?
  • What stupid men.→It means that men are stupid.

Topic Questions

  • Show more
  • Does this sound natural?"My throat feels dry because I ate corn without drinking any water."
  • What does bust mean here?https://www.instagram.com/reel/C743c2iRBYo/?igsh=MXIzbHZ0Nzk4NTkzYg==
  • Does this sound good? I think there are no mistakes, but since the text will be included in an im...
  • Do both sound natural?I had a light sleep last night. My mind kept racing the entire night, so I...
  • Does this sound natural?A uncertain future and financial instability make many young people anxi...

Newest Questions

  • Show more
  • I have a question about this movie, " it's a wonderful life."George's dream is interrupted a c...
  • with decision we use do or make? and "do call or make" ??
  • Are these sentences correct? There are a lot of times when work feels boring.There are times ...
  • This curry is a little "lighter" than the curry that we tried the other day.→This curry is a ...
  • The sun is edging away, and I am already caught in its revolution. What does “in “ mean here?🤔

Previous question/ Next question

  • How do you say this in English (US)? 庭には二羽ニワトリがいる
  • How do you say this in Japanese? you just keep stalling instead of do what I asked
Please read this story and check the mistake! It's quite long!! Once upon a time, in that village had a nice girl who sang so beautifully, everyone really liked her voice, they called her by the name: Lisa. She lived happily with my family, until one day, (2024)

References

Top Articles
The Republican from Springfield, Massachusetts
The Eagle-Tribune Memorials and Obituaries | We Remember
Walgreens On 37Th And Woodlawn
tModLoader - Unusacies' Battle Rods Mod - Use special fishing rods as weapons!
Fizz, the anonymous Gen Z social app, adds a marketplace for college students | TechCrunch
Unblocked Duck Life Treasure Hunt
100 Auto Repair YouTubers You Must Follow in 2024
7 Race Tracks You Can Go Out and Buy Right Now (some for less than you think) – Autowise
Into the world of Filthy Rich & Catflap - Comedy Rewind - British Comedy Guide
Here Are Trump’s 10 Biggest Billionaire Donors
Hillside Funeral Home Washington Nc Obituaries
Portugal vs Slovenia - Final Score - July 01, 2024
Latest Posts
Browse | Obituaries | The Eagle Tribune
Craigslist Com Omaha Nebraska
Article information

Author: Neely Ledner

Last Updated:

Views: 5433

Rating: 4.1 / 5 (62 voted)

Reviews: 85% of readers found this page helpful

Author information

Name: Neely Ledner

Birthday: 1998-06-09

Address: 443 Barrows Terrace, New Jodyberg, CO 57462-5329

Phone: +2433516856029

Job: Central Legal Facilitator

Hobby: Backpacking, Jogging, Magic, Driving, Macrame, Embroidery, Foraging

Introduction: My name is Neely Ledner, I am a bright, determined, beautiful, adventurous, adventurous, spotless, calm person who loves writing and wants to share my knowledge and understanding with you.